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Arihant

Joined: 09 Feb 2008 Posts: 66 Location: INDIA
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="Kirk"][i]I recommend you read the book that tells of temples of the sky
And signs that move through space and time, a clock that points the way.
Nonsensical it seems, and yet diurnal motion has its sway
And all will pass the shifting peak and find the closing of its day.
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Ok, I think I'm done now.[/quote]
Beautiful Kirk! , you have undone me too!
Thanks for general entertainment , my pleasure!
Regards!
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 11:47 pm Post subject: |
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Arihant,
You were my inspiration to take the poetic path . I’m seeing changes I want to make in that last one, but I’ll preserve the rugged beauty created by the giddiness of a few moments.  |
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Arihant

Joined: 09 Feb 2008 Posts: 66 Location: INDIA
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:28 am Post subject: |
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[quote="Kirk"]Arihant,
You were my inspiration to take the poetic path . I’m seeing changes I want to make in that last one, but I’ll preserve the rugged beauty created by the giddiness of a few moments. [/quote]
Oh , but i was so wary of posting so..."stiff-upper-lip-type of response, you know" ...but i could never figureout . you or anyone ,would respond in so understanding a way! Nice to have people like you , living there!
Yes yours , following one , infact that full post of yours is worth reading & shows yours....exquiste taste & highly evolved mind -workings:
Poetry?
As she launched the satellite’s precious circuit,
So wrongly a Model Ship she aspired to fire,
Our painstaking task of years transpired
Has come to naught, for fear that she again be irkèd.
Hell, I don't know !
...most beautiful ..you are trying to be subtle..is a fine road!
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